Sunday, 15 May 2011
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Five LOVE Haiku
Love! It makes us ravenous and dizzy. Sometimes so dizzy we can only manage a few syllables. At such times, only a haiku will do.
when life winks at me
i want to rush out the door
and wink it to you
taking a shower
true stink down the drain spinning
i like the you-smells
heart outside ribcage
soaring sky and bottomless hole
finally alive
never wanted them
til I imagined your face
inside their faces
need has no place here
but you're too precious to lose
love's core is fearful
And I used to think poetry was corny. Have a love haiku? Post it below!
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Comments (2)
love is like Slurpee
don't slurp too fast or brain freeze
tummy ache hurts bad
"love tap" my ass - only has 4 syllables. the top one in the photo used isn't even a haiku unless i'm missing something lol..i'm too analytical