Wednesday, 06 January 2010
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Lonely Isn't a Good Color on Me
The only
butterflies
that I like
Are the kind I get
when you Kiss me.At four in the morning, after spending two hours acting fifteen years old again. Touching, but not to much. Close, but not close enough. My nose might press into your cheek when I laugh a little too hard, but our lips lie slightly out of line. "What are you thinking about?" Of course you know. But I say something that is not the curve of your face and is not the way your hair falls across your forehead and is not the heat of your hand pressed against my lower back. But it is.
I know all of the motions like the back of my hand. And yet, it all feels new again.
I'll pretend like I don't know how this ends.
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Comments (45)
beautiful :)
I second that.
love it (:
Delightful. <3
aww .. very sweet <3 .. wish i went back to that feeling =/
This post seems rather pointless.
Oh man... this describes exactly how I feel.
Nice.....?
Holy! . . . . .=O niiiiice!
nice
very intense for a fifteen year old..
Thanks everyone. Except the one that thought it was pointless, I suppose. ha.
And, not to be misconstrued, I am not actually fifteen. "Acting" was the key word.
Lonely... so lonely...
hah... the song is playing in a loop
I like this. (:
I like this too.
Hmm... I'll pretend I know what's going on.
very nice
@Starlite - haha I had the same song in mind
I'm 15. and it was very nice. it made sense to me.
How did you know?!
@Meowmeowkimmaee@xanga - I don't know about you, but I sure realised that they spelt colour wrong here!
wow. amazing poetry. no more is needed :). good ending too. i love that its clearcut honest and direct :). I'm not usually a fan of bittersweet endings, but I suppose that's just the author's preference. anyway, in this case, it fits perfectly.Â
thanks for making my day.
this rings a few too many bells for me