Tuesday, 06 October 2009
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Screaming At The Top Of My Lungs
We all have a soul mate, waiting till the day we meet
to wrap in each others arms and forget the world exists.
To love one another faithfully and true, as if there was no other.
But what if somewhere along the road I’ve lost my soul?
Who will calm this raging storm brewing within my heart?
The dark cloudy storm swirling with rage, and hatred?
Who will calm this beast I call my heart?
I need a lover, I need a friend, someone to start with all over again. I need that one, to tell you everything is going to be okay,
and when she speaks those words, my problems will slowly float away,
because in that moment, I’ll know, even if I’m stripped of all I have,
I’ll be with her, and that’ll be all I need to conquer this life we call our own.
We’re all in a waiting line of death, slowly watch as the clock ticks downward,
no one wants to cut, and no one sure as hell doesn’t want to be alone at the end.
We’re all in this waiting line, and I’m running out of time, oh my love, if you’re out there,
will you come, will you come and show me that life isn’t such a dark place I’ve come to known, filled with whores and pigs, and vile excuses we call people.
Oh my lover, I’m calling I’m calling but you’re not coming.
Oh my lover, I’m screaming at the top of my lungs and you can’t hear me.Do you ever feel this way?
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Comments (40)
Yes.
Oh wow. That's very nice.
Was this written by you?
And yes, I do feel that way sometimes.
Before I found my wife..... I felt that almost everyday oh yes.. I remember those days
Yes. But I found him, and he tore open my soul and now he won't hear me.
@x0x_loveless_x0x@xanga - Yeah i wrote it.
@MarksBeneathTheSkin@xanga - I'm sorry to hear that
@MarksBeneathTheSkin@xanga - Yeah.. same here.
Mm I like not believing in soul mates and all that jazz. If I can do better, then I'm willing to dump the guy and move on.
I also like being single? I have plenty of friends who really care about me, and they're the ones I turn to when the going gets rough. A good hug and cuddle soothes a lot of negative emotions.
I used to believe in soul mates, not so much anymore. Maybe I just need to meet the right guy who can change my mind, instead of constant assholes.
Maybe you're not loud enough... :)
I really liked the writing
@Starring_Hobo89@xanga - haha trust me, I think i've been screaming loud enough. Thank you very much.
I don't think I need anyone by my side, personally. I was under the impression I located my soulmate then, of course, she broke up with me. Having someone to hold would be nice, but for now I'm good.
Uh, no. This is incredibly CHEEEEEEEEESY.

Nope.
Very well written. You do know how to expressed your feeling through writing...I hope you'll find your soul-mate.
Wow that's amazing.
Sometimes...but then I sober up and realize I'm one of those vile excuses for people.
I found mine.
nice writing though.
i feel that right now.
I felt that way til I found him.
He's my everything. Now the only thing I want to scream is how much I love him, because I want the world to know.
Oh, and your soul mate will come along ;3 I guarantee it...you can't search for them, it's all a matter of a chance meeting.
Wow that was amazing. and sometimes i definitely feel that way.
great writing... this is exactly the way I'm feeling right now. I'm with someone, and I love him to death, but I don't think he can hear me anymore. In fact, I'm sad to say it's probably going to be over very soon. Best of luck to you!
Nice